sábado, 26 de junio de 2010

Sports

Sports are an activity that I do not practice very much because I waste lot of time in classes at the University and also worried what I have to do for those classes. But, actually I think that sports are very important for physical and mental health. I really think that I need to take me the time for practice during the year, because I practice them only in vacations and that is not enough. During vacations I´m get use to ride my bike, go to the gym and also I have begun to realize soccer, because a great friend encouraged me to practice it.
I think that people think that soccer is an activity focusing only on men, but I think they are wrong, because women now have begun to practice it with great force.
Soccer is a game that is played throughout the world, regulation is played between two teams and a ball, the beauty of this activity is that you can play it wherever you want you can even play it when you're alone.
At first it was quite difficult and I will not lie still is, but over the games I started to love this sport and I have much intention to continue practicing.
I would like to join many more women to play soccer, and people stop believing that it is an activity only for men.
Mainly I like soccer because it keeps you healthy, it's a great sport for your physical and play with men is fun, no matter what some people have a wrong thought and do not like playing with women.
What do you think about soccer? Do you like it?

2 comentarios:

  1. Good, Paulina.

    You say, " I really think that I need to take (me the) time (for) TO practice during the year"

    What do you mean by, " regulation is played between two teams and a ball,..."

    Also, here you have too many ideas together, with incorrect punctuation and no connectors.

    "regulation is played between two teams and a ball, the beauty of this activity is that you can play it wherever you want you can even play it when you're alone."

    Be careful with run-on sentences. (There is a link on task 7)

    Another example of "run on" here.

    "Mainly I like soccer because it keeps you healthy, it's a great sport for your physical and play with men is fun, no matter what some people have a wrong thought and do not like playing with women."


    1.5 points

    Paula

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