viernes, 28 de mayo de 2010

My iPhone


Mi favorite piece of technology is my iPhone. I got it since March, i don´t remenber the specif day, but it was a gift for my birthday from my mom. She gave me when I returned from vacations. My birthday was the 17 of February, so I was not at home to celebrate and get the presents.
Well, I use my iPhone in many ocasions, because it has many funtions. The people who created it call it a smartphone because of his multiple funtions. It is a cellphone, a camera phone, a portable media player to listen music, also have unlimited conection to internet, so I can check my email at any time or whereever I´m, or surf on many pages. Because his unlimited conection to internet I can download free aplications, like games, maps, and many others that can be usefull for me. This piece permits me to customize it acording to my needs. I like it because of that, it gives me the flexibility to have in just one piece many things that may be useful, necessary and fun.
I think that besides of be so useful, provide facilities and comply many funtions, it is just a material object, like others material objects, that can be useful while we want, while provides us something. I think that my life would be the same if I don´t have it, maybe not that confortable, but the same anyway.

4 comentarios:

  1. technology is great! Your description made me think about buying an iphone xD

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  2. iPhones are so famous ! XD

    Is it better than iPad or Blackberries ? I don't know... XD

    See us !

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  3. wooooooooow, iphone that scary me, someday those things will think and walk!
    it can do everything

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  4. Good, Paulina.

    Have a look at this paragraph, I made some corrections:

    "(Mi)MY favorite piece of technology is my iPhone. I got it (since)IN March, (i) I don´t reme(n)Mber the speciC(f) day, but it was a gift for my birthday from my mom. She gave IT TO me when I returned from vacations."

    You also have to watch your spelling.

    For example,

    "I think that besides of beING so useful, IT provideS facilities and IT comply (DOES) many funtions, it is just a material object, like other(s) material objects, that can be useful while we want, while THEY provides us something. I think that my life would be the same if I (don´t) DIDN´T have it, maybe not that confortable, but the same anyway.

    We will discuss them at the lab.

    2 points.

    Paula

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